雅思寫作中的簡單句怎麼擴寫

雅思寫作中的簡單句怎麼擴寫

  擴句,怎麼擴才更有效?

  到上面一步為止,烤鴨們可能都會覺得非常簡單。那麼下面就是考驗大家基本功和【組裝能力】的'時候了,在找到了主語和謂語的修飾詞之後,我們進一步對句子進行擴句。

  1) 主語加上性別

  Most female consumers shop unwisely.

  2)謂語動作用並列結構修飾

  Most female consumers shop unwisely and spend too much money.

  這裡的shop and spend就是複合謂語結構,但是到目前為止,這仍舊是一個簡單句,我們繼續豐富它。

  3) 將主語改寫成複合主語結構:

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money.

  這時主語和謂語都已經進行了改善。但是你問還有提升空間嗎?當然有!

  4)新增介詞短語作為細節補充說明

  時間狀語和地點狀語,都是你的擴句好朋友,不信我們來看:

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money in their early ages.(時間狀語)

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on luxurious purchases.(名詞狀語)

  Most female consumers and their girlfriends shop unwisely and spend too much money on souvenirs.(名詞狀語)

  即使是狀語,也可以透過疊加將句子變得更加豐滿。有能力的烤鴨當然可以透過狀語從句定語從句等等來讓句子更不一樣。

  擴句幾步走

  在寫作時我們同樣需要注意詞彙搭配的問題,下面讓我們來看一個雅思寫作的常見句子:

  Advertisements have influences on people.

  相信所有備考過關於廣告和傳播話題的烤鴨對這個句子都不會陌生對不對,那麼我們現在開始試著擴句。

  1) 選定要擴句的詞彙

  在這個句子中,我們先選擇advertisements,influences, people這三個詞彙,然後開始準備擴句。

  2) 觀點新增

  選好詞彙之後,就選擇搭配,但搭配的組合一定要與自己的觀點相符:

  influences我們通常都和positive / negative 搭配;advertisements也可以分為commercials和non-profit adverts;people可以用the general public替代,所以句子如下:

  Commercials and non-profit adverts have both positive and negative influences on the general public.

  這就是將簡單句進行華麗變身的方法啦~最後環球君要給大家出個題目哦!

  本週考題

  Community service is helpful for both students and society.

  這句話老師的擴句版本為

  Establishing community service as a compulsory part in high school education is not only helpful for students but also meaningful for whole society.

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