英語作文開篇改寫增加技巧的方法

　　編者按：今天需要做的不是改寫，而是加內容。其實開篇萬能句就是那幾個套路，掌握好就行了。下面小編就來帶你一起學習下，希望對大家有幫助。

　　Looking back on the history of human society, we can find that a large number of advancements, whether social or scientific, were achieved just because human beings were not satisfied with the living conditions or the level of science and technology at that time.

　　回溯人類社會歷史，我們會發現很多次的進步無論是社會進步還是科技進步能夠取得成就，都是因為人類不滿足其當時的生活條件或科技水平。

　　依舊是競爭壓力與成績的例子

　　1.競爭壓力：直接在句子後加入Hence, with those advancements also comes the pressure.

　　→Looking back on the history of human society, we can find that a large number of advancements, whether social or scientific, were achieved just because human beings were not satisfied with the living conditions or the level of science and technology at that time. Hence, with those advancements also comes the pressure.

　　回溯人類社會歷史，我們會發現很多次的進步無論是社會進步還是科技進步能夠取得成就，都是因為人類不滿足其當時的生活條件或科技水平。因此，壓力也就隨之而來。

　　接著和昨天一樣，可以寫什麼情況下有壓力，1-2句帶過即刻，因為body部分會具體論述，然後亮明自己觀點→第一段結束

　　2.成績/進步是否總是有益：

　　直接在句子後加入Hence, whether progress is always beneficial for us.

　　→Looking back on the history of human society, we can find that a large number of advancements, whether social or scientific, were achieved just because human beings were not satisfied with the living conditions or the level of science and technology at that time. Then whether progress is always beneficial for us.

　　回溯人類社會歷史，我們會發現很多次的進步無論是社會進步還是科技進步能夠取得成就，都是因為人類不滿足其當時的生活條件或科技水平。那麼，進步是否總是對我們有益呢。

　　接下來直接亮明自己觀點是認為有益還是不認為有益→第一段結束

　　作者|二琳

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