初中英語書面表達與改錯

  作文改錯很容易混淆,總覺得哪個都對,其實不是哦。下面是小編給大家整理的一些,供大家參閱!

  書面表達與改錯篇1:

  I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby,1.________

  such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________

  songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________

  interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________

  to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________

  and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________

  able to improving the friendship between China and7.________

  the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________

  And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________

  harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!10.________

  答案與解析:

  1.hobby→hobbies many後接複數名詞,下文such as後列舉的內容也是提示。

  2.piano前加the play the piano表示“彈鋼琴”,是固定搭配。西洋樂器類名詞前常用定冠詞the。

  3.去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜愛的”,因此原句語義重複。

  4.√

  5.But→So 前後邏輯上是因果而不是轉折關係。

  6.west→western 依據語境這裡表示“西方文化”,應用形容詞western作定語。

  7.improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能夠做某事”。

  8.hoped→hope 這裡表示說話人現在的願望,故應用一般現在時。

  9.去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任,信仰”,其後不能接從句。

  10.how→what no matter what happens無論發生什麼,what充當從句的主語。

  書面表達與改錯篇2:

  My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________

  and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________

  will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________

  have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________

  as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________

  think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________

  we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________

  and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________

  medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________

  some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________

  答案與解析:

  1.am→are 本句的主句是my father and I,所以謂語動詞用複數形式。

  2.but→and 此處表示的是順承關係,而不是轉折關係。

  3.刪去第二個the 一般情況下,表示國家的單個詞語前不加冠詞。

  4.spend→cost 本句的主語不是人,而是it,所以用cost。

  5.had→have 短文全篇敘述的都是現在和將來的情況。

  6.what→that/which或刪去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句,修飾先行詞the car,關係代詞在從句中作賓語,可以省略。

  7.them→us 根據文章的開頭部分可知這裡指的是作者本人和作者的父親,因此應用us。

  8.possibly→possible as...as possible表示“儘可能……”。

  9.prevent前加to 此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。

  10.√

  書面表達與改錯篇3:

  After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

  look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

  found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning,3.________

  I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

  He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

  studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

  his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

  will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________

  take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

  what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

  答案與解析:

  1.去掉the finish school是固定搭配,表示“畢業”。

  2.month→months month是可數名詞,several暗示應用複數形式。

  3.interested後加in be interested in是固定搭配,表示“對……感興趣”。

  4.him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語,修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。

  5.do→did 根據邏輯可知這裡表示畢業前的情況,故用一般過去時。do well in“幹得好”。

  6.√

  7.beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

  8.will→would 這裡應考慮主從句時態的呼應,故用過去將來時。

  9.surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配,表示“令某人驚訝的是”。

  10.said後加was what he said是主語從句,“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動詞。