高三英語作文分析點評

  高考即將來臨,英語作文一直在考試中佔著重要的比例,想要英語成績高分,作文是關鍵。下面,是小編為你整理的,希望對你有幫助!

  篇1

  假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文,來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的資訊,寫信介紹住房的情況,並告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。

  注意:1、詞數:100左右;2、參考詞彙:房租—Tent***n.***.

  作品一:

  I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

  Hope you will come here soon!

  All the best!

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  分析

  本文格式正確,意思表述完整,行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用,還使用了以‘which,’引導的非限定性定語從句,從而使文章層次分明,富於變化,不愧為考場佳作。

  篇2

  假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家裡。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你準備外出,請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條,內容包括:

  1.外出購物

  2.替房東還書

  3.Tracy 來電話留言:1***咖啡屋***Bolton Coffee***見面取消

  2***此事已告知Susan

  3*** 儘快回電

  注意:

  1. 詞數100左右;

  2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

  Mrs. Wilson,

  I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  分析

  本文屬於提綱式要點作文,是學生比較熟悉的題材,體現了英語學習應該注意實用性,生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、準確,各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細組織語言,合理安排結構。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明瞭,開頭要開門見山。

  篇3

  假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華,請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封郵件,告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓練營,希望他一起參加,郵件的內容包括:

  1. 介紹訓練營的相關內容***例如:時間、地點、參加者等***;

  2. 說明你打算參加的原因;

  3. 詢問對方的意向。

  注意:1. 詞數不少於50;

  2. 開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。

  提示詞: 龍舟訓練營 Dragon Boat Training Camp

  Dear Jim,

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  【解析】 應用文寫作包括書信、通知和演講稿,書信是較為常考的型別。2015年北京高考英語考查的是書信中的邀請信,並且涵蓋了部分的介紹文內容,這一考查方向與2015北京朝陽一模類似。其中,龍舟訓練營屬於中國傳統文化的範疇,題中給了參考詞彙,在詞彙方面對於學生來說應該不存在太大問題。雖然學生在寫邀請信時障礙比較小,但如何寫出高分作文是難點。

  寫應用文時應保證以下內容:

  寫作原因considering that……, I would like to invite you to …….

  解釋原因 with the intention of doing, I planned to….

  提出邀請 If you could come, please feel free to contact me at any time.

  結尾 I believe the camp will be so exciting that you can never miss it

  分析

  考生在寫作中一定要注意格式規範、語氣合理、交際感強,否則分數很可能會在12分以下。應用文書寫不需要過長的句子,長度控制在兩行以內。還應注意行文流暢,感情真摯,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart,使用be scheduled to do,with the intention of doing 等升級短語難度,但要避免通篇難詞。另外需要提醒的是,書信應有稱呼,有結尾,若開頭結尾已給出,需要在答題紙上重新抄寫一遍,否則會扣相應分數。